"Just trying to make sure that it's a balanced and truthful article"
I think you've done an excellent job with difficult material!! Bfn
xxxx-----Some suggestions for fine tuning if you think they are worthwhile: 1. Metropolitan’s decree is now on the ROCOR websiteSee http://www.rocor.org.au/?p=7603 2. UTAS sold their chaplaincy building in Dec 2011 so MMW’s involvement with UTAS would have ceased earlier that year. 3. The link to SPM’s webpage is now a dead link. 4. The locality for SPM is given as “Cascades”. This is not strictly correct because there is no such suburb, and “Cascades” does not appear on the Australia Post list of postcodes. “Cascades’ is used loosely by locals to describe the general area below Mt Wellington in Hobart. SPM is located in McRobies Road, “South Hobart” with postcode 7004
