Difference between revisions of "Talk:Solus Christi Brothers"

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Believe the article has been cleaned-up as much as possible and would welcome any additional comments and/or suggestions.
 
Believe the article has been cleaned-up as much as possible and would welcome any additional comments and/or suggestions.
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:The article, as it stands, reads more like an advertisement, or at the least something that Solus Christi would (and, in fact, did) write; the article is currently a giant copyright infringement (see their home page).  It needs to have headings, needs to lose the capitalised words, should have all external links at the end (rather than unnecessarily in the middle).  In short, it needs to be rewritten - both to look like an article, and to avoid copyright infringements.
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:Hope this helps.  Also, please remember to sign your posts with <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. &mdash; edited by [[User:Pistevo|<font color="green">Pιs</font><font color="gold">τévο</font>]] <sup>''[[User talk:Pistevo|<font color="blue">talk</font>]]'' ''[[User talk:Pistevo/dev/null|<font color="red">complaints</font>]]''</sup> at 03:12, December 20, 2006 (PST)

Latest revision as of 11:12, December 20, 2006

Believe the article has been cleaned-up as much as possible and would welcome any additional comments and/or suggestions.

The article, as it stands, reads more like an advertisement, or at the least something that Solus Christi would (and, in fact, did) write; the article is currently a giant copyright infringement (see their home page). It needs to have headings, needs to lose the capitalised words, should have all external links at the end (rather than unnecessarily in the middle). In short, it needs to be rewritten - both to look like an article, and to avoid copyright infringements.
Hope this helps. Also, please remember to sign your posts with ~~~~. — edited by Pιsτévο talk complaints at 03:12, December 20, 2006 (PST)